Dissonant.
The first strings didn't really match up at all. It made it sound very harsh. When the bass came in it made things a little better but it still needs work. After the synth came in the song because repetitive for a while until you had just the synth alone which was somehow much louder than everything else was. (Compresser maybe? I don't know)
The song went on a for a while in the same fashion as it had before the bass-less five-odd second interlude and then reverted back to the very first part. It could use a lot of improvement. I felt like it didn't capture the spirit of the original piece. It didn't remind me of it at all.
-Stargenx
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