Stargenx's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Calm_Sky [Box-Killa]]

Very good!

The first section reminded me a lot of Owl City. I liked the fading drums in the beginning. The rock drums pounded a little too hard sometimes and they needed a better outro. I liked the part with the conga(?) but I really think it needs a better ending. The song itself gives off a calm vibe. Some of the guitar's notes were a bit off the chord progression. The only things I can think of to make this song better are:
1. Better transitions. The parts seemed to be crushed together a bit.
2. Better ending. It didn't seem to loop very well which is why I think it needs to be a song rather than a loop. It would greatly benefit from some type of ending.
3. Rock drums a touch lower. The crash sounded nice but was a bit too loud.
4. Fit up some of the guitar notes a bit better.

That would raise it up to 10 in my opinion.

-Stargenx
{Semi-Review Request Club}

[dubstep wip]

Wobbly 0.0

Sounded very wobbly. One thing I can say is that the wobble changed frequently and I liked that. The snare had a good amount of crash to it. This song could be very good if you started bringing in some bass and pads. You could also add some faster drums later on to speed up the song. Great first attempt.
-Stargenx
{Semi-Review Request Club}

SessileNomad responds:

lol never seen a semi review request club b4

i thought about taking the speed up in this, but i dont know how well that would g owith the genre, most dubstep ive heard is UNGODLY slow

[_Dancing With Demons_]

Very good!

I thought that the soft drums at about :35 were very well done and the song is pretty rockin' in general.
What I thought could change however was the clap. Perhaps you could add a more punchy clap or replace it with a rock snare drum, I don't know, I just thought it sounded a little weak.
Another thing to consider might be adding more melody to it. A large part of the song sounds like it's the background to a song rather than a completed song.
In the way of sounding like club music, it's not quite club music. It's more like chill music rather than club music. It doesn't pump as much.
The length was fine and didn't seem overly long or too short. It was just a smooth ride the whole way through. This leads me to another issue: it needed some surprises in it. Just a little crescendo or something to mix it up a little. This was a good song in general though. This could be better but it's not bad.
-Stargenx
{Semi-Review Request Club}

Birdinator99 responds:

Pretty sure I've got crescendos in there dude, but good point about the clap -- very true. Melodies are not my forte, so sorry about that!

Thanks for the review!

[Stray Memories(Demo)]

Needs work

The tempo seemed to randomly change. The parts were sporadic and the order in which they appeared also seemed random. The synth didn't play the right notes on some parts. It had some weird compression issues in it too. You could be a lot better if you mixed and mastered better.

Mayvix responds:

this was mixed out of Different Versions. It a Demo Real Really.
i was actully fixing to take it down!. lol thank you for trying to listen to it.

[Blue (WIP)]

6/10

The singing in the beginning was washed out and kept repeating. There were too many bars that were the same. The song didn't draw me in at all. You should work on adding a climax. It sort of droned on and on for a while. The singing was also sort of off-tune which became incredibly annoying after a while. I heard some volume peaking in there too. The volume on the singing became harshly loud after a while.

[Drop Style(Remix WIP)]

Shudderific

It had a sort of sharp edge. Some parts sounded muted. It has your distinctive repetitive parts but with a weird sort of disorting static added. A step lower than some of your other submissions.

Mayvix responds:

yeah i know i upgrade my speaker system & have a New version to upload but haven't got around to it yet.

Thanks for the honesty.

[It Is Wicked(Remix)]

Not quite....

It would fit into the genre of .....Noise......
It isn't very appealing. Very harsh and in some places repetitive and boring. It's already too long. Normal humans just don't have the attention span to sit through more than 3 minutes of something like this.

[Squidhunting Manwhore]

Ooooh

Ooooooooh Aaaaaah! Very.... intense.

[Kiss Me Through The Phone RMX]

It's ok.

The song is fine but it just seems like cheating to post other people's songs just to make them popular.

giftedbuttwisted responds:

Well it's my cousin's, and he's mixing our new cd so I wanna help him out ya kno?

[Crystal Overdose]

Gut!

Ich mag es! Sehr gut gemacht!

Pocketpod responds:

herzlichen dank^^