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Nice.

Great song and for your information Fort Minor used the Garageband loop. They didn't put it in Garageband. They used it from Garageband.

Repetitive.

While it does have atmosphere, the song is really repetitive. You could argue that the beginning is different, but when you skip ahead to random points in the song and find that they sound the same as the first points, it doesn't bode well for the song in general.

malakai043 responds:

I agree that it gets repetitive, I've swapping out one of the synths so that the song blends better but uses the same melody.

Also working on swapping in some new tracks...

Again, So-So.

You've nailed the generic music that the simpler people on Newgrounds enjoy. I suppose that's good if you don't want to advance, but if you ever want to be anything you need to make your own style. I'm not trying to be an asshole but this just isn't very good. It's generally mediocre. I hope you can improve someday.

DjAbbic responds:

Yup. It's only my 5th month, and I'm 13. With time, I'll be making something that is, HOPEFULLY, original and not generic. I thank you, again, for taking the time to honestly review this.

So-So.

I've been listening to some of your songs and I've found that they've been rather repetitive. Music needs something to make your songs stand out of the crowd. You need your own distinct style. The minor keys don't really complement anything in this song and make it sound distorted and harsh. Adding cheering doesn't make everyone else cheer, I'm sorry to say.

No...

I'm sorry to say this, but this song isn't too good. Firstly the bass has so little tonality that it sounds harsh, wrong and kind of hurts my ears. The drums start out as a slow pounding which isn't very easy to listen to at all and when the other drums start coming in at around 0:15, the drums become very repetitive. At 0:30 when the main lead comes in it becomes even more repetitive. The droning drums get louder which helps kill the tonality. at 1:02 we did not need any more drums. What is needed in this song is more change and tonality. Less harsh sounds would be better.
With time maybe you will become a good musician.

DjAbbic responds:

Actually the only reason this sucks is because this was a first attempt at house. If you check out my other stuff they aren't as bad as this, but I thank you for your honesty. It IS very helpful to have critics that give actual helpful reviews :)

Pretty good

Pretty good but some of the instruments were a bit off tune.

Meh

It's not good and it's not bad. It's just that generic techno sound..... Where's the surprise? Where's the love? Where's the change? Where's the hope? Where's the defining characteristic that sets it apart from all the other dumb generic songs?

AxijeN responds:

Its generic techno. It has no originality. ;A;

Huh.

Firstly this isn't your first instrumental song. Instrumental means it doesn't have words. Maybe you were saying that this is your first classical song. Anyway. It has a nice melody but it doesn't go places with it.

SqueezyLemon responds:

this aint my favorite song either. Thanks for the review though.

Hmm

It was a bit slow to start off. While I was listening I realized I made a song using the same drum loop as you and almost the same type of song XD
You can listen to it here if you want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/304022

AudioVision responds:

Ah garageband, bringing folks together one loop at a time...

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it started the same, remained mainly the same and ended almost the same. Nice harmony and melody but this song needs a bit more change; maybe a crescendo to a climax and then going down again.

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