Nice
Great but the drums are still a bit too loud. I would suggest holding the drums back until about :29 with the cymbals and then bringing it up to a crescendo. Then later on you could bring the drums down. Also consider extending it. The song is called Love and War, but wheres the love? All I can hear is the war. You should add a softer part. Great song though!
Hey, thanks for the review. Sometimes Love can resemble War when it is lust...remember in the act of flirting to mate ...the male is also in kaotic flying patterns trying to knock out the competition and you have al little bit of both going on...the chorus or as you put it : at 29 secs when the cymbals and the black keys come more into play is where the actual love and mating takes place....oooh. Kinda Lightning in a bottle
Hmm
Pretty good but the drums overpower most of the harmonies. Later on in the song the harpsichord is a bit clangy. It needs a little more bass, and some volume tweaks. Nice layering though. Just needs a few more things to smoothen it out.
Thanks again for the review. As written above...this was originally placed as three separate songs. They all did well individually and it was time to put it together.
Great song.
Ah thats a nice song. As musicians we must give order to music, and this song has order! Sounds very mechanical and yet still classical. I think that it sounds like a factory, constantly making machines.
Thanks Stargenx for the review and score. Thanks for getting it.
no...
completely boring. no buildup, doesnt sound ambient. this begs one question.
WHO WOULD PUT THIS ON THE RADIO...
meh
you seem to have a problem with drums. unless you make them yourself with real drums and want to show off. again the drums are wayy too loud and smash the rest of the song into the dust. trying making a song without drums.
I'm not sure if you mean that you literally can't hear the other instruments because the levels are off, in which case it sounds fine on my end, but i'll check it out on other speakers. Or you mean that you just don't like how I do drums, in which case I can only apologize, that's just how I like things. I don't feel that the drums overpower the rest of the song. In any case, thanks for the comments!
lol...
one of the most hackneyed pieces ive ever heard. very very boring. it just repeats over and over and over and over and over. the beat sounds off for the first 40 seconds. the only good thing is the ending which signifies the song is over. you get 5 stars just because of that. there was very little build to it. sounds very loop-y. i would expect a song with that name to be an epic classical song. this is a mockery.
Haha, cause your music has such high ratings!
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its pretty good but the drums are too loud. they smash over everything else
lol
pretty good, sounds a bit midi-ish
nice
very lovely song! the key changes are unexpected, the quality is fine! very melodic and singing. has nice parts in it. how long have you been playing piano?
if you get a chance check out some of my songs =)
Thanks for your positive comment!
Been playing piano for a bit more than 18 years, but I'm a beginner at doing things my way... Because piano lessons can be boring sometimes! :)
Listened to your work and I clearly feel our both influences in classic music! I love your arrangements, but maybe the final sound may be tuned for a more polished result...
Talk to you later!
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Not very good... try switching to classical instruments like didjeridu or sitar for this.
that would be a change from all the generic songs on newgrounds. make it sound indian and you have 10/10 5/5 from me. i know its possible i can hear a good melody
thanks, I will probably try your advice. This was just a starter, since I am a pure newbie in the domain of music. I will be updating this track later, I am working on a Punk Rock/Speed Metal track.
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